It's a good piece. Maybe one thing you might want to think about is phrase length; every section was pretty uniform and the divisions between them were very clear. Next time, maybe try obscuring the boundaries between sections and shortening/lengthening phrases to make it less predictable (rhythmically, anyway). I really liked the end, it worked very well.
Not a bad idea; that might give future pieces (particularly atonal ones) a nice depth. Thanks for the tip; and thanks for the review.
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